Wednesday, May 11, 2016

The sour lolly
I ate a sour lolly
It turned my face inside out
My eyes were pouring out water
As I started to have doubts.

Should I have eaten this lolly
I thought I could of gone without
I ran around the room
And then I started to shout.

I jumped into the pool
As the pain started healing
I broke into a cold sweat
As  I had a good feeling

This lolly wasn't that bad after all
Although it was so sour
I ran inside and grabbed another
This one lasted for an hour.

1 comment:

  1. wow Lucy that is really good i like how you have described every word correctly